Corey Haines · skills.sh · 180K installs
“An innovative experience” showed up
I asked for bakery first-screen copy. In a minute I got a big headline and “Get started.” You still don’t see the person grabbing it on the way home.
“Write landing copy for our bakery”
PREMIUM HANDMADE
An innovative bakery experience
Headline with nobody buying
Create special moments with premium handmade desserts
Get started
Fresh ingredients
Premium quality, always
Made with care
Service from the heart
A special experience
Moments you’ll remember
Same ask, questions first
Write landing copy for our bakery
❓ Q1 Who’s buying?
➡️ People grabbing something on the way home
❓ Q2 What’s hard right now?
➡️ You can’t tell gift boxes from bread for tonight
❓ Q3 What should one button finish?
➡️ See only what was baked today
Only today’s bake
We only put up what we baked today
Don’t pick a box. Grab it on the way home.
See today’s bread
Words that look impressive just show up. Even if you don’t put in who’s buying, the headline becomes “an innovative experience.” You have to decide who’s buying first before “We only put up what we baked today” shows up. Writing those questions into the chat every time is work too.
Turn this skill on, and it decides who’s buying first, then writes.